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考研高分作文的标准及写法概述

篇1：考研高分作文的标准及写法概述

关于考研高分作文的标准及写法概述

短文写作的成绩评定首先看内容是否切题, 是否符合题意的要求, 然后看语言表达是否清楚、连贯、正确，考研高分作文的标准及写法概述。具体标准如下:

15～13分: 内容切题, 包括提纲的全部内容; 表达清楚, 文字连贯; 句式有变化, 句子结构和用词正确。

12～10分: 内容切题, 包括提纲的全部内容; 表达基本清楚, 文字基本连贯; 句式有一定变化, 句子结构和用词无重大错误。

9～7分: 内容切题, 基本包括提纲的要点; 表达基本清楚, 句子结构和用词有少量错误。

6～4分: 内容基本切题, 语句可以理解, 但有较多句子结构和用词错误。

3～1分: 基本按题意写作, 但只有少数句子可以理解。

0分: 文不切题, 语句混乱, 无法理解。

长度计分标准:

91～100词: 扣1分

81～90词: 扣2.5分

71～80词: 扣4分

61～70词: 扣6分

60词以下: 扣8分

在前面我们已经提到了得分在15～13分之间的作文的标准, 下面我们再结合实例详细加以论述。

一、内容切题, 包括提纲的全部内容

自1991年研究生入学考试增加作文的考试项目以来, 每次作文都要求考生根据所提供的写作提纲完成一篇短文, 因此, 评分标准的第一项即要求内容切题, 包括提纲的全部内容, 实际上对于任何命题性作文来说, 内容切题都是一项最基本的要求。那么该如何达到这一要求呢? 我们认为考生应该从以下几个方面入手:

(1) 认真审题。根据题目类别, 弄清文体的要求, 并判明文章的种类( 议论文、说明文、记叙文), 同时确定文章要阐明的主题或要表达的中心思想, 若题目已经给提供了提纲, 还要注意弄清各提纲要点之间的逻辑关系。考生在拿到作文题后切勿唯恐时间不够, 提笔就写。一旦写的内容偏离了题目的要求, 等到发现了再改就来不及了。我们平常所说的“磨刀不误砍柴功”就是这个道理。

(2) 注意安排设计段落。根据文章的中心思想, 确定各个段落的主题内容和主题句。如果是议论文, 一般要从论点的正反两个方面来考虑, 首先是某观点的合理成分或者某物的长处, 然后是该观点的不合理成分或者该物的短处, 最后阐明自己的观点。如果题目给提供了提纲, 只要把提纲扩展成主题句即可。

(3) 切忌将记忆里比较熟悉的句子生拉硬扯地弄进作文, 使作文结构松散, 意思不明确, 甚至会偏离主题。

二、表达清楚, 文字连贯

文章要做到表达清楚, 文字连贯, 文章各段落就必须根据提纲所确立的不同主题句来展开, 而且各段落的主题句将段落的各个部分凝聚在一起, 流利地表现出段落所要表现的思想, 使读者能够轻松地理解段落中各部分以及段落之间的联系。下面, 我们来看一篇93年考题的范文:

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Today more and more advertisements are seen on the TV screen. Every evening a series of advertisements come immediately after the News Program is over, informing TV viewers of the many different sorts of up-to-date products on the market. Besides, it often happens that while you are absorbed in a wonderful film on TV, endless ads interrupt you from time to time and make you quite annoyed.

There are two reasons, I think, for the growing number of ads on TV. First, in a competitive economy, the consumer usually has the choice of several different brands of the same product. Thus, manufacturers are confronted with a problem how to keep sales high enough to stay in business. They solve this problem by advertising. Through advertising, each manufacturing company tries to convince consumers that its product is special. Second, most consumers are interested in ads. They wish to get from TV ads the first-hand information about new products, which enables them to choose the one that they like best. As a result, there is a sharp increase in ads on the TV screen.

Personally, I am in favour of TV ads because most of them are interesting and informative. But there is no denying that some of them are tedious and boring. So I feel TV stations are faced with an arduous task to strengthen the control of ads, to improve their quality and to make them more attractive.

(注: 该范文摘自朱泰祺编著《新编硕士研究生入学英语考试复习指导》一书)

在上面的作文中, 作者采用了明确的主题句, 而且每个段落都是紧紧围绕主题句写作而成, 另外, 作者还使用了明显的连接词, 例如第一段中的besides, 第二段的first, thus, second, as a result, 第三段中的but, so等等, 使得整个文章主题思想清楚, 文字浑然一体，其它英语写作《考研高分作文的标准及写法概述》。

三、句式有变化

初学写作的同志, 由于对英语写作没有信心, 通常不敢大胆地使用自己已经掌握的语言基础知识, 包括英语句法知识。结果整篇文章都是以主语、谓语、宾语句式为主的简单句子, 文章因此显得刻板, 毫无生气。实际上, 同汉语一样, 英语的句子结构也是丰富多彩, 变化多样的, 同样的一个意义可以用多种句子结构来表达。例如:

例1. The villagers took great care of the old man.

The old man was taken great care of (by the villagers).

Great care was taken of the old man (by the villagers).

例2. His speech was good enough to stir the audience.

His speech was too good not to stir the audience.

His speech was so good that all the audience felt stirred.

例3. A computer was among the new products on display.

Among the new products on display was a computer.

例4. Most metals are good conductors, and silver is the best.

Most metals are good conductors, silver being the best.

Most metals are good conductors, with silver in the lead.

因此, 我们在写作时, 应充分利用我们已有的句法知识, 采用各种句法结构, 使作文句式多样、生动活泼。

四、句子结构和用词正确

要在写作中, 使用正确的句子结构, 选择恰当的词汇, 首先要勤学多练。尤其在开始练习写作的初始阶段, 可勤查语法书和字典等工具书, 背记常用词和短语, 扩大词汇量, 拓展知识面。要深刻理解所背词语的内在含义, 并了解他们所使用的语言环境。复习备考时, 请务必认真阅读本书的`后面关于写作方面的论述, 模仿并熟记一些常用的过渡词和英语句型, 以及一些英语范文,并切忌自编自造汉语式的英语句式和词组, 养成不良的写作习惯。一定要注意使用学习过的,比较熟悉有把握的句式和词汇。

其次, 在考试过程中, 对于那些拿不稳, 没有把握的句子, 尽量采取“ 回避政策”。下面是一篇在94年研究生入学考试中获得14分的作文, 整篇文章很符合我们在上面所述的高分作文的要求:

On Making Friends

As a human being, one can hardly do without a friend. Society is made up of individuals, and making friend is a very important part in our life. Friends can give you a lot. First, if you have trouble with some problems, you can consult your good friends and exchange opinions. Thus you will feel comfortable and encouraged. Secondly, if you wish to do some physical exercises, such as playing table tennis, you can play with friends and have a good time. Then you can relax yourself. In short, we need friends.

But what is true friendship? Some people think friends are people whom they can play with. In my opinion, a friend in need is a friend indeed. True friendship can encourage you when you are in difficulties. A true friend not only shares with you your joy and happiness but also your trouble and anxiety. When you need him, he will give you a hand and spare no efforts. Of course, these principles are the same to you when you treat your friends.

As far as I'm concerned, I wish to make as many friends as possible. The world is a big family, and we will feel relaxed in a friendly atmosphere. You will discover the world is full of flowers and happiness. I wish some day we can all be friends.

另外, 值得一提的是, 写作属于主观性测试, 阅卷人对答卷印象的好坏会直接影响到考生的分数, 而且研究生入学考试英语短文写作的阅卷采用的是总体评分的方法, 阅卷人员就总体印象给出奖励分, 而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分, 因此, 考生要特别注意卷面的整洁, 答题纸四周都要留空边。在一般情况下, 你的作文的读者就是阅卷的老师, 所以, 短文忌用对读者不尊重的词语, 避免引起阅卷老师的反感, 例如, 有些考生习惯使用“Do you know …? Let me tell you”之类的过分口语化的句子, 这样有把读者当做小学生之嫌, 易引起人的反感, 因此应该尽量避免。另外, 切勿将题目中提供的英语单词抄错, 否则会使阅卷人感觉到你是一位粗心甚至不负责任的人。还有一点容易给阅卷人造成不良印象的问题是标点符号的使用, 在阅卷的过程中, 我们经常会碰到有的考生的作文整篇没有一个明显的标点符号, 在每个句子或应该加注标点的地方都用一点, 根本分不清是逗号还是句号, 有的缺乏标点符号的常识, 在一个书名两边加注《》号, 这些都会影响到考生的成绩。因此, 希望考生注意认真阅读后面关于标点符号使用的一部分。

最后, 我们谈谈考试过程中短文写作的时间分配问题, 短文写作的时间为40分钟, 要力争写完写好, 这就要求考生做到有条不紊，忙而不乱，充分发挥自己应有的水平。

建议按照如下的方案分配时间: 审题2～3分钟, 组织素材, 细节和关键词: 5～6分钟, 起草: 20～25分钟, 修改定稿: 6～10分钟。

篇2：考研英语翻译高分标准

考研英语翻译高分标准

研究生入学考试中，翻译的考查方式是主观题，它不单单要求学生的英语基本功，而且对考生汉语表达能力有很高的要求，考研辅导专家认为，翻译评分上没有具体的标准，不易得分，所以很多学生对该题型感到挠头。

长难句结构划分要清晰

划分英语长难句结构，是理解英语句子含义的基础。许多同学反映，一看到长句就恐慌;再加上几个不认识的单词，根本无从下手，不知道原文在表达什么，所以只能认识几个单词就翻译几个单词，写出的译文自己都不知所云。考研辅导专家提醒考生，要成功翻译一篇英文文章，既要对英语原文理解正确无误，又要把汉语表达得流畅通顺。但在这两者中，正确理解原文既是起点也是关键。而要做到正确理解原文，就需要有扎实的英语语言基础，特别是英语句型结构知识和正确分析英语句子结构的能力。

逻辑关系梳理要明确

在正确理解原文句子结构的基础上，如果局限于原文的句子结构，没有真正弄懂各句之间的逻辑关系，也会造成误译。这是因为，英语中的许多连接词本身就有不同的含义，比如as，既可以引导原因状语从句，也可以引导时间状语从句和定语从句，还能和其他词构成新的引导词和短语等;而且某些连接词引导的从句的表面逻辑关系与实际逻辑关系并不相同，比如所有的定语从句看起来都是作定语，但实际上有时却从原因、结果、目的或条件等方面对被修饰词加以限定，所以为了更确切地表达这种逻辑关系，往往将一些定语从句译成相应的状语从句。考研辅导专家提醒考生，在正义反说或反义正说方面，还有对状语是修饰限定动词还是整句话，某些词语是作状语还是作定语，或者是否存在否定转移的理解等，都可能造成逻辑关系的.误译。

逻辑关系梳理要明确

篇3：考研英语短文写作高分标准

考研英语短文写作高分标准

短文写作的成绩评定首先看内容是否切题, 是否符合题意的要求, 然后看语言表达是否清楚、连贯、正确。具体标准如下:

15～13分: 内容切题, 包括提纲的全部内容; 表达清楚, 文字连贯; 句式有变化, 句子结构和用词正确。

12～10分: 内容切题, 包括提纲的全部内容; 表达基本清楚, 文字基本连贯; 句式有一定变化, 句子结构和用词无重大错误。

9～7分: 内容切题, 基本包括提纲的要点; 表达基本清楚, 句子结构和用词有少量错误。

6～4分: 内容基本切题, 语句可以理解, 但有较多句子结构和用词错误。

3～1分: 基本按题意写作, 但只有少数句子可以理解。

0分: 文不切题, 语句混乱, 无法理解。

长度计分标准:

91～100词: 扣1分

81～90词: 扣2.5分

71～80词: 扣4分

61～70词: 扣6分

60词以下: 扣8分

在前面我们已经提到了得分在15～13分之间的作文的标准, 下面我们再结合实例详细加以论述。

一、内容切题, 包括提纲的全部内容

自1991年研究生入学考试增加作文的考试项目以来, 每次作要求考生根据所提供的写作提纲完成一篇短文, 因此, 评分标准的第一项即要求内容切题, 包括提纲的全部内容, 实际上对于任何命题性作文来说, 内容切题都是一项最基本的要求。那么该如何达到这一要求呢? 我们认为考生应该从以下几个方面入手:

(3) 切忌将记忆里比较熟悉的句子生拉硬扯地弄进作文, 使作文结构松散, 意思不明确, 甚至会偏离主题。

二、表达清楚, 文字连贯

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(注: 该范文摘自朱泰祺编著《新编硕士研究生入学英语考试复习指导》一书)

在上面的作文中, 作者采用了明确的主题句, 而且每个段落都是紧紧围绕主题句写作而成, 另外, 作者还使用了明显的连接词, 例如第一段中的besides, 第二段的first, thus, second, as a result, 第三段中的but, so等等, 使得整个文章主题思想清楚, 文字浑然一体。

三、句式有变化

初学写作的同志, 由于对英语写作没有信心, 通常不敢大胆地使用自己已经掌握的语言基础知识, 包括英语句法知识。结果整篇文章都是以主语、谓语、宾语句式为主的简单句子, 文章因此显得刻板, 毫无生气。实际上, 同汉语一样, 英语的`句子结构也是丰富多彩, 变化多样的, 同样的一个意义可以用多种句子结构来表达。例如:

例1. The villagers took great care of the old man.

The old man was taken great care of (by the villagers).

Great care was taken of the old man (by the villagers).

例2. His speech was good enough to stir the audience.

His speech was too good not to stir the audience.

His speech was so good that all the audience felt stirred.

例3. A computer was among the new products on display.

Among the new products on display was a computer.

例4. Most metals are good conductors, and silver is the best.

Most metals are good conductors, silver being the best.

Most metals are good conductors, with silver in the lead.

因此, 我们在写作时, 应充分利用我们已有的句法知识, 采用各种句法结构, 使作文句式多样、生动活泼。

四、句子结构和用词正确

要在写作中, 使用正确的句子结构, 选择恰当的词汇, 首先要勤学多练。尤其在开始练习写作的初始阶段, 可勤查语法书和字典等工具书, 背记常用词和短语, 扩大词汇量, 拓展知识面。要深刻理解所背词语的内在含义, 并了解他们所使用的语言环境。复习备考时, 请务必认真阅读本书的后面关于写作方面的论述, 模仿并熟记一些常用的过渡词和英语句型, 以及一些英语范文,并切忌自编自造汉语式的英语句式和词组, 养成不良的写作习惯。一定要注意使用学习过的,比较熟悉有把握的句式和词汇。

On Making Friends

As far as I“m concerned, I wish to make as many friends as possible. The world is a big family, and we will feel relaxed in a friendly atmosphere. You will discover the world is full of flowers and happiness. I wish some day we can all be friends.

篇4：考研英语写作的高分标准

考研英语写作的高分标准

1.内容切题。审题准、不跑题。文不对题会严重影响成绩，导致写作失败。

2.表达清楚。语言要简洁、准确、条理清晰，主题明确。

3.意义连贯。遣词造句得当，表达连贯平稳。论点论据展开合理（以因果、对比、分类、定义、列举、概括、详情、时间、空间、过程或综合等方法来展开）。

4.句式有变化。采用适当的句式来表达相应的'内容。常用句式包括简单句、并列句、复合句、主被动句、长句、短句、否定句、双重否定句、疑问句、反问句、倒装句、强调句、插入语、独立主格成分等。

5.用词有变化。避免重复使用同一词汇，可适当使用代词、同义词、近义词、关联词使表达富有动感。同义词的使用是衡量考生语言运用能力的一个尺度。

6.语言规范。符合英语的表达习惯，语法错误少，写出的英语不是中式英语。

篇5：考研英语高分作文须达到四类标准

考研英语高分作文须达到四类标准

一、高分作文的四个标准

1、主题准确。考研英语作文不会明确告诉你文章的明确主题是什么，而只会通过图片、图表、只言片语暗示你，你需要根据仅有的信息作出判断，做到不曲解、不过分延伸，直接准确地把主题思想总结出来，这是必须做到的第一步。

2、结构清晰有层次。好的文章必须结构清晰、有层次。就大作文来说，一般需要分为三部分。第一部分描述图片或图表，引出话题，提出论点;第二部分展开论述，分析原因或表达不同观点;第三部分上升一个高度，提出解决办法或发出呼吁等。各部分之间有一个层层递进的关系。

3、词句出彩。词句是文章的基本构成，在写作过程中，有意识地使用一些高大上的词汇，替换常见表达，尽量写出一些从句、复合句、强调句、倒装句等特殊句式，同时注意长短句结合，表达流畅有节奏，会给文章大大地增色、加分。

4、卷面整洁。卷面在考试中非常重要，如果一篇文章通篇都是涂改，或字迹歪斜潦草，哪怕文章本身写得再好，也很难得高分。这就需要平时养成良好的.写作习惯，先打腹稿或草稿，下笔谨慎，落笔少涂改，保证卷面整洁。

二、如何写出高分作文?

1、攻克语法

要想写出高分，必须有亮点，在考研英语中这个亮点就是：长句子。如果通篇都是平实的短句或平句，起伏不大，很难迎合阅卷老师的胃口，相反，写出几个有水平的高逼格的句子，瞬间就能提升档次，绝对是实力的证明。因此，语法这一关，必须要攻克，强调句、倒装句、各种各样的从句，平时多练习写一写，考场上绝对能为作文加分。

2、培养语感

许多小伙伴会感到写英语作文非常难，经常无话可说，或有话表达不出来。如果换成是汉语写作，相信每个人都能滔滔不绝，但换成英语就怂了，这就是缺乏语感的原因。想要培养语感，需要做到：多阅读。建议小伙伴在复习过程中遇到好的文章，可以在晨读时间多读几遍，读得多了，也就读得顺了，语感自然能培养起来，写作文时离“下笔如有神”也就不远了。

3、积累模板

考研英语作文的类型一共就那么几种，小作文无非就是书信、摘要、备忘录、报告、便笺，大作文无非就是提纲型、图表型、图画型、情景型等。每种类型都可以积累一定的模板，开头、结尾、分析型话语、总结型话语等等。积累一些有自己特色的模板，把一些亮点句型有意识地安排在这部分，考场上可以信手拈来，不仅节省时间，而且能保证文章的水平和质量。

篇6：考研英语高分作文

cultural blending

the cartoon aims at informing us of the significance of cultural blending definitely，no one can deny the importance of it. cultural blending is conducive to the harmony of society. people who have different cultural backgrounds, religious beliefs and life experiences can reduce unnecessary conflicts and frictions, enjoy a better understanding and communication. to further illustrate the significance of cultural integration, i would like to take an empirical evidence as a case in point: studies conducted by certain sociologist have demonstrated that the degree of cultural integration is intimately associated with the development of economy, the stabilization of the society and people’s sense of happiness.

at no time should we underestimate the significance of cultural blending. accordingly, we should keep an open mind to accept the essence of other cultural and endeavor to preserve our own traditional culture. only in this way can we enjoy the fruits of cultural integration.

篇7：考研英语高分作文

考研英语高分作文

考研英语高分作文是怎样炼成的?从英语学习起，就涉及英语作文，写出一篇英语作文并不很难，但是写一篇英语高分作文却不容易，而在考研英语作文写作中，尤其如此。怎样写出一篇考研英语高分作文，大嘴外教老师将以三步骤与同学们分享考研英语高分作文是怎样炼成的。

考研英语高分作文是怎样炼成的第一步：描写现象。

其实很多同学都了解，我们的考研英语作文为什么提到三方面，去浏览大纲的话，你发现它在确定我们考研英语作文的时候，明确指出：要求同学们在自己的作文当中，也就是200来字的大作文当中要非常真切地、确切地写出我们对整个考研英语作文技巧的要求。考研英语作文的“逻辑三段论”当中，你可以在第一个自然段，把你所看到真真切切的现象写出来，我们都知道什么叫“现象”，现象是我们看到的，在我们身边发生的事情，在我们试卷当中一个图画里所表达的东西，同学们也看到了一个新的东西，当你写出现象的时候，实际说的'直白一点，你就已经会了英文写作的描写手法了。我们今天要考研，可能你第一个自然段一定是描写出来的，而且这种描写一定要客观。

考研英语高分作文是怎样炼成的第二步：透过现象看本质。

如果我们只把现象说出来，那不是考研的要求，因为考研的第二步要求的是什么?通过现象看你内在的本质，内在的本质又是什么东西?其实就是画外音。从看过来，这些年的大作文考试当中，只有考研英语大作文当中看到没有画外音，其他的考试都是有画外音的。比如我们考了，“爱心是一盏灯，越黑暗的地方越明亮”;我们也考了文化，国内文化和国际文化之间的关系;甚至我们都知道“养老足球赛”，这是跟和-谐社会相背道的现象;同时我们也看到了，对贝克汉姆的盲目崇拜是不可为的，所以这些东西对同学们来讲，都是一种现象，随后给了你一个画外音。这时候同学看到，拿考研英语大作文来说，“你一条腿、我一条腿，你我一起走南闯北”，我们都知道，“你我一起”就在向我们传递着一种理念。当你第一自然段描写完看到的图画之后，第二自然段最重要的就是让同学们把这个现象下面的本质告诉我们。

考研英语高分作文是怎样炼成的第三步：议论。

最后该来说说考研英语作文的议论了。毕竟我们写的是议论文，什么是议论呢?很多同学，他们不能非常清晰地分清什么是说明，什么是议论，这造成了一种尴尬，很多同学都在该说明的时候把议论混进去了。但是你要知道，在真正你们的目标读者，就是判卷老师分析的过程中，他一定会重点要看你是不是把说明和议论分清楚了。所以同学要知道，到了今天，我们重要的备考阶段究竟是什么，你应该头脑非常清晰地能够把以上的内容弄清楚，那也就是我们要了解，我们在真正该说明的时候就去说明。

那么议论应该怎么去说呢?我们采取了一些措施和手段。比如一些丑恶现象我们要去解决它;当我们看到了“人”字结构相互支撑的时候，我们应该弘扬它、学习它，因为这样的话我们会怎样怎样，这是同学在这个时候要思考的。说到这儿同学可能已经感觉到了，这个所谓的“三”这个神奇的数字已经告诉了我们，我们在一篇大作文当中，理论上讲是三个段落的。这三个段落应该确切地说，按照它的写作手法来分，第一段应该是描写，第二段应该是说明，第三段确切地讲是我们的议论。

篇8：考研英语作文高分

考研英语作文高分模板

directions:

you are supposed to write for the postgraduate association a notice to recruit volunteers for an international conference on globalization, you should conclude the basic qualification of applicant and the other information you think relative。

you should write about 100 words. do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. use ” postgraduate association “ instead。

范文：

an announcement

jan. 9，20xx

international conference on globalization，from march 3th to 10th，will be held at tsinghua university. we，the postgraduates’ association，are entitled to organize this conference. thus，we are badly in need of volunteers to assist us in organizing the relevant affairs，including reception，distribution of documents，technical support，etc。

students who have previous experience as volunteers are preferred. basic knowledge in computer，fluent oral english and an amicable personality are some of the qualities we desire. volunteers shall be available for at least 3 days without absence during the conference。

if you are interested and willing to have a whole new experience in this semester，please do not hesitate to send your resume to liming@hotmail.com before jan. 20th. your applications are welcome。

postgraduates’ association

篇9：考研英语大作文的写法

考研英语大作文的写法

今天我们来谈谈英语大作文怎么去写。

其实大作文无非就是考察三段式。第一段，就是考察我们描述事件的能力，第二段是关于事件的分析能力，第三段也无非就是对事件的看法或者评价又或者是解决方法。其实这三段内容就是我们以后入研究生之后，需要用到的一种能力。以后看专业学术书，又或者写论文时能用上。

进接着话题，我们第一段，就是描写图片怎么写？不要想太多，你想太多反而无从入手，就按部就班，图上什么样，你就简单的描述。你想得太复杂，反而写不出来。这里点播一下大家，我们要背的不是作文的整个模版或者整篇文章，因为那既不可能也没必要，背的是自己认为好用的句子，这种句子就是要用很强的兼容性，放之四海而皆准的。然后背多了，写作文时就一定要给我想办法用上去。作文不是为了写作文去写的……而是为了我们以前背过的句子，想办法在文章中把他很好地使用出来，想办法把他套上去。并不是我们为了论证一个东西，去编一个什么句子，而是用我们以前背过的大量句子去组织，说得简单点，你写这句话的目的，就是因为你以前背过，你就是要写这句话，所以你才套上去的，明白了吗？大量的事实证明，你只要背过很多兼容性的句子，到时候顺手一堆句子。

开头很简单，基本就是As is vividly depicted in the picture....there stand a ....,a ...one,...ing...it is not difficult to deduce that the cartoonist intends to show us a(n) .... message/emerging problem that...however,this phenomenon or problem has stirred a heated discussion among the people all over nation.或者,this phemomenon has caused wide public concern.就这么套，图片简单描述，图片简单说明，马上要说明这个图片反映的是什么现象和趋势，一定是现象，问题或者趋势，不可能很狭隘，就图片而图片。

中段就是说明问题，中段写的方式有很多，基本上可以分为三个层次，特别注意论据，英文写作论据并不要求很好的证明观点，本质是看你句子表达能力，已经三层式的结构组织。你只要从三个不同方面来组织，用出要的句子结构，就是高分，不用去管三个论据有没有逻辑关系，或者递进，并列，根本不用去考虑，关键是每个层次里面是否有符合句子。

千万别用first,second,third，这种傻呼呼的词，给大家一个规范用词：

first of all/to begin with/above all

in the second place/in the second instance

last but not least/in summary

注意论据三点有时一下子想不出来，你就可以举例，可以说some expert pionts out that.../take ... in instance.../according to the investigation conducted this year indicates that.../some statistics expose that...

最后结论：

In a word,we can safely draw the conclusion that...

下面是我自己整理归纳的句子，有很大的`兼容性，你只要背熟，自己选自己说着顺口的，不一定全要背出来，到考试的时候，为了展示这些句子，就写出来，写作文的容易一定是我们背过的句子把大展示出来，不是让你就作文写作文，一再强调！

1.as far as... be concerned [就...而言]

2.has/have unpleasant association with sth.[对...没好感]

3.an increasingly number of...[越来越多的...]

4.point out...[指出]

5.contribute (directly) to sth...[（直接）有助于...]

6.proper measures should be taken to/great efforts should be made to[应采取适当的措施/当努力去做]

7.be questioned by...[受到质疑]

8.no one can deny the fact that...[不可否认]

9.a recent investigation indicated that...[最近一项调查表明]

10.tend to have favourable attitude towards sth...[受到欢迎]

11.turn a blind eye to/turn a deaf ear to[视而不见/聪而不闻]

12.pay a heavy price to do sth.[为做某事付出巨大代价]

13.the most significant aspect of sth.[最重要的是]

14.make it possible for sb to do[使某人做某事成为可能]

15.be obliged to admit the fact that[不得不承认]

16.spare no effort to do[不歇余力做某事]

17.the information I`ve collected for many years lead me to believe that...[从我这些年所收集的信息使我相信]

18.pose a tremendous threat to sth.[给……造成巨大威胁]

19.produce a far-reaching influence on sth.[对……产生巨大影响]

20.live under illusion/down to the earth[生活在幻想中/脚踏实地或面对现实]

原创内容，欢迎互相学习，进步！

以下是历年作文原创范文

From the picture above,we can see a spical ”hotpot“ ,which contains many unique ingredients,stand for ”LAO SHE“,”KONG FU“,”Decompostion“ and some things to that effect.At the bottom of the picture,a sentence stands there extremely prominent,which can be brielf interpreted by this way:culture ”hotpot“ is not only good tasting but also strongly good for one`s health. A bit exggerating picture is,however,through careful observation,we may discover that behind this strange senario,what the cartoonist intends to show us is extremely obvious:the significance of integration between Chinese culture and other countries` culture.

With the implementation of the China`s reform and opening up,an emerging tendency is that more and more foriegners are getting fascinated with our Chinese culture.They come to China to learn Chinese language,taste delicious Chinese foods,make friends with Chinese people, and etc.All these make them pretty comfortable and agreeable.At the same time,however,this phenomenon also stirred a heated dated in our society,so,how to render the other countries` culture be more compatible with our Chinese culture has caused wide public concern.

As far as I am concerned,before giving my opinion I think we should take closely look at the culture`s function widely.Policymakers should be more aware of that culture integration not only benefits to our making a further development but exerts a great contribution to the world peace.

As is vigorously shown in the photo,we can see some people sitting in front of their disks and being absorbing in controlling their computers.The expressions in their faces look pretty agreaable.However what the picture intrigue me is that they were separated from each other by a spider web,which is the metahpor of the internet web.At the bottom of the picture,a sentence stands there prominent,which can be briefly interpreted by this way:internet contributes to both connecting and isolating each other.A bit exaggerating the picture is,but from observation seriously,we may find that what the cartoonist intends to show us is extremely obvious:the correct attitude towards the using of internet.

With the science and technology development,more and more people,espically youngsters are using internet now.With the internet,they will not bother to go to the laboray,when they want to search for some specific references.All the things entail them to do is sitting in front of the computer,and clicking the mouse.The information ranged from social science to the medicial science are all avaliable on the internet.They could also use some unique voice functions to contact with friends promptly.Thanks to the internet.it is the internet has changed our life style pattern.We are obliged to admit the fact that internet has made itself increasingly become the indispensable ingredience of our daily life.It do much convenience to us.However,some people now are worry about the inproper using of the internet,which may generate tremendously side effects.For one thing,using excessively internet in front of the table with less body motion will strongly do harm to health.For the another,using internet desparately will hamper our face-to-face comnunication.People sooner or later will find they were alienated from each other gradually.

To my opinion,owning to it has got both positive and side effects,I think we should upright our attitude towards the using of internet first.The internet no more than a servant to our life.we should be the host of ourself rather than being the slaver of the internet.

In the cartoon above,two men combined with each other catch my eye intriguingly.Both of them lacked a leg,however they were run

篇10：GRE高分ARGUMENT作文写法分析

GRE高分ARGUMENT作文写法分析

GRE高分Argument作文范文写法分析

实例分析

The following appeared as part of an article in a daily newspaper:

”Most companies would agree that as the risk of physical injury occurring on the job increases, the wages paid to employees should also increase. Hence it makes financial sense for employers to make the workplace safer: they could thus reduce their payroll expenses and save money."

Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. In your discussion be sure to analyze the line of reasoning and the use of evidence in the argument. For example, you may need to consider what questionable assumptions underlie the thinking and what alternative explanations or counterexamples might weaken the conclusion. You can also discuss what sort of evidence would strengthen or refute the argument, what changes in the argument would make it more logically sound, and what, if anything, would help you better evaluate its conclusion.

参考范文

This argument states that it makes financial sense for employers to make the workplace safer because by making the workplace safer then lower wages could be paid to employees. This conclusion is based on the premise that as the list of physical injury increases, the wages paid to employees should also increase. However, there are several assumptions that may not necessarily apply to this argument. For example, the costs associated with making the workplace safe must outweigh the increased payroll expenses due to hazardous conditions. Also, one must look at the plausability of improving the work environment. And finally, because most companies agree that as the risk of injury increases so will wages doesn’t necessarily mean that the all companies which have hazardous work environments agree.

The first issue to be addressed is whether increased labor costs justify large capital expenditures to improve the work environment. Clearly one could argue that if making the workplace safe would cost an exorbitant amount of money in comparison to leaving the workplace as is and paying slightly increased wages than it would not make sense to improve the work environment. For example, if making the workplace safe would cost $100 million versus additional payroll expenses of only $5,000 per year, it would make financial sense to simply pay the increased wages. No business or business owner with any sense would pay all that extra money just to save a couple dollars and improve employee health and relations. To consider this, a cost benefit analysis must be made. I also feel that although a cost benefit analysis should be the determining factor with regard to these decisions making financial sense, it may not be the determining factor with regard to making social, moral and ethical sense.

This argument also relies on the idea that companies solely use financial sense in analysing improving the work environment. This is not the case. Companies look at other considerations such as the negative social ramifications of high on-job injuries. For example, Toyota spends large amounts of money improving its environment because while its goal is to be profitable, it also prides itself on high employee morale and an almost perfectly safe work environment. However, Toyota finds that it can do both, as by improving employee health and employee relations they are guaranteed a more motivated staff, and hence a more efficient staff; this guarantees more money for the business as well as more safety for the employees.

Finally one must understand that not all work environments can be made safer. For example, in the case of coal mining, a company only has limited ways of making the work environment safe. While companies may be able to ensure some safety precautions, they may not be able to provide all the safety measures necessary. In other words, a mining company has limited ability to control the air quality within a coal mine and therefore it cannot control the risk of employees getting blacklung. In other words, regardless of the intent of the company, some jobs are simply dangerous in nature.

In conclusion, while at first it may seem to make financial sense to improve the safety of the work environment sometimes it truly does not make financial sense. Furthermore, financial sense may not be the only issue a company faces. Other types of analyses must be made such as the social ramifications of an unsafe work environment and the overall ability of a company to improve that environment (i.e., coal mine). Before any decision is made, all this things must be considered, not simply the reduction of payroll expenses.

思路讲解

1. 这篇GRE作文首先在字数高达599words, GRE考试虽然没有对写作提出明确的字数要求，但其评分时偏好字数更多的文章却也是不争的事实。

2. 这篇文章在结构上采取了标准的五段式写法，首段、末端，中间三段，整体结构没有出现头重脚轻的问题，文章平衡性极佳。

3. 整篇文章在词句运用上极为出彩，没有出现陈词滥调、用词重复或堆砌句子的问题。

范文用法

对于这篇文章，最为错误的用法无疑就是把整篇文章囫囵吞枣一般死记硬背下来，然后上了考场进行大段默写。假如考生这么做，一个被判雷同抄袭扣甚至取消成绩的惩罚在所难免。当然大家对于其中一些精彩用词和句子也绝对不能直接照搬，否则同样有一定风险。正确做法是首先理解文章优势，了解其在逻辑论述和遣词造句上的精妙之处，然后结合自己的语言对文章进行改良，这样才能最大程度上吸收到这篇文章的精华所在。

GRE高分范文这么用才有收获

看过上面的例子，接下来小编就为大家具体介绍GRE高分范文的正确用法。

1. 首先，大家需要对范文的来源进行筛选和甄别。市面上打着高分满分GRE范文幌子的资料很多，但其中有不少是滥竽充数之辈，所选用的文章大多本身质量低劣根本称不上范文。为了避免学习到这些假货反而受到不良影响，大家首先需要找到真正高品质的范文资源。一般来说，官方或是权威机构出品的资料里，包含的范文质量较高，比如官方出品的OG指南中，涉及写作部分就有许多真正意义上的高分范文。另外诸如曼哈顿和MAGOOSH之类国外权威考试机构的复习资料中，也有不少优质范文。另外，许多权威教学机构都有自己的在线工具和模考软件，比如上面提到的两家机构，还有官方模考软件PP2，在作文部分都会配置一到两篇高分范文给大家参考，这些文章也是极好的。

2. 其次，范文中的好词妙句大家要消化改写后再使用。就如同在上文真题实例分析中所说，再好的句子，也绝对没有直接拿来就用的道理，一方面有雷同风险，另一方面每个人的语言用词习惯都有所不同，强行记忆和自己习惯不符的句子很容易出现记忆混淆，背诵错误的问题。所以，考生如果看到一些比较优秀的句子，那么不妨在不影响其质量的情况下，根据自身的写作风格稍作一些加工调整，消化吸收后再拿出来用到自己的文章中。

3. 再次，面对优秀范文，切忌整篇文章死记硬背。一个原因上面说过，容易被判雷同，另一个原因则是对记忆力消耗太大，每个人的记忆力都是有限的，而GRE作文题目又数量众多，考生如果看到一篇好文章就想要整个背下来，那么无论记性多好都会是件耗时费力的辛苦活，付出和回报完全不成比例。正确做法是学习这些文章的写作思路。GRE作文Argument是驳论文，要求找漏洞发现逻辑问题，这是需要一定技巧的，哪些是主要漏洞，如何展开驳论的层次层层递进，大家都可以通过范文来进行学习，这也是范文真正的价值所在。

4. 最后，范文中常会使用到一些不错的素材。素材本身可能并不出奇，但恰到好处的使用却能够为整篇文章增光添彩。考生不要迷信高分范文里的素材，简单粗暴地直接背素材，正确做法是学习能够让素材具备说服力的使用方法，比如哪些素材用在什么类型的题目，证明哪些观点时才能发挥最大作用。学会这种素材和题目的搭配才是核心关键。

GRE高分范文错误用法注意要点讲解

最后小编要特别提醒大家关于GRE高分范文的常见使用误区。可能有些考生有过这种经历，明明用了高分范文来复习，结果作文成绩却不升反降。会出现这种情况，正是因为大家在用法上出现了错误。考生需要特别注意的范文错误用法主要有两种，上文也有所提及，一个是原文照抄，这是大忌，后果也非常严重，绝对不能犯这种错误。另一个是思路照搬，看到相似题目不管三七二十一直接套用范文的思路。GRE作文中存在大量形似神异的题目，看起来说的是同一件事，用的事例也相近，但作文的写作要求和侧重点却有很大区别。大家一定要仔细审题后再确定写作思路，切忌直接套用范文的写作套路，一旦出现张冠李戴的情况，最后得分往往会惨不忍睹。

GRE写作高分范文：想法付诸行动的困难性

It is easy to welcome innovation and accept new ideas. What most people find difficult, however, is accepting the way these new ideas are put into practice.

拥护革新和接受新想法很简单。但是在大多数人们看来，最困难的是接受把这些新想法付诸实现的方式。

GRE写作范文：：

The writer of the issue connotates an ironic phenomenon: though innovation is required in our era and eulogized by most people, application of it is clannished vehemently because of the fear of failure and the possibility of obtained possession and tradition impairing. The author grasps the paradox psychology of most people and pertinently reveals a universal mentality.

As is known that innovation may bring big progress and result in even a revolutionary transition of a society: the elevated efficiency of work, the ameliorated life, the enticing fruit of new technology and so on. Following with innovation of the second industrial revolution, great changes took place and immediately a renewed world unfolded before us with the application of its fruits. Seeing unimaginable profits and the magic power, who (including the society and government) can suppress their agitating desire to restrict development of innovation?

Unfortunately, innovation doesn't always follow the people's will and always acts like an uncontroled horse running in the plain. Worrying about the side-effect, people have to hold their desire back but admire those who are brave enough to taste crabs for the first time. Not everyone possesses the same courage as Biil Gate's, who dare invest on a fresh field and give up the chance of studying in Harvard University, which is the dream of most aggressive young people. Often, pondering what they have already possessed with what they might get from innovation, most people prefer the former to the latter, even content to sacrifice the latter to ensure the integer of the former. For example, a department may enroll those who are not very deft in the work but behave complaisant before higher-ups and deny to those who stick to their innovational opinion obstinately. After all, it is required more to cooperate with others harmoniously and conform to the traditional rules nowadays than to creat a new law according to individual penchant, in any company and corporation.

Maybe, some one argues that, how to cultivate innovation if personality should abdicate to interests of collective? Does the statement above alludes that employees should do nothing but keep silent and follow what the higher-ups dictated, strangling their inspiration to accord to the criterion today? No doubt, such supposition is rediculous. I mean that employees should try to approach their original though to tenet of the collective, not attempt to disobey the existed norm, respect suggestion and supposition of others and circumspect the innovation and then discuss with all the members in the company. That is, responsibility should be taken before the innovation is applied to practice.

Of course, many people don't have the ability that controling their compulsion of carrying their innovation into application. It doesn't lack of people who dare not apply innovation, and people who hold innovational thought are not scarc either, however,those who possess both of the two abilities and are lucky enough to encounter a proper opportunity to release their innovation is very few. The seperation of spirit of application and creation of innovation is the root of the the strange phenomenon, that innovation and new ideas are here and there while the acceptance and combination of them with application is too little to be heard.

GRE写作高分范文：冒险与计划

Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning.

在生活的所有领域中，成功往往更多的来自于把握机会或者冒险而不是通过仔细谨慎的计划。

GRE写作范文：

The speaker asserts people are more likely to attain success when taking chances or risks than planning carefully and cautiously. However, after comparing the characteristics of careful planning and taking chances, I strongly hold that they are of the same importance in the pursuit of success.

In competitive sports, while making appropriate training plans and effective competition strategies constitute necessary conditions of winning the matches, taking risks is almost inevitable when athletes or their coaches confront a sudden matter that might influence the course of a match and that has not been taken into consideration beforehand. In modern competitive sports, it is widely acknowledged that scientific and effective training contributes to athletes’ better performance during matches. Good competition strategies, on the other hand, resulting in the better allocation of physical force, better use of skills or the higher rate in scoring, also play a vital role.

However, when the star players of a soccer team or a basketball team are off the game or fail to implement their chief coach's strategic intention, leaving the whole team in adverseness, the coach faces the choice whether to substitute he/she or not. No doubt substituting a star player with a bench player means taking risk because the bench player may not perform as good as the star player and may make matters worse. If this happens, the substitution will incur discontentment of the players and critique from the team's fans, media and the boss. The capability of the coach may then be suspected and he/she may even be fired. Nevertheless, if the coach dares not to take the risk to substitute a poorly performed star player, his/her team will probably lose the game. Taking chances and risks is reasonable when one is dealing with something that has not been taken into consideration previously. So, in competitive sports, planning and risking are both necessary.

In academic fields, careful and cautious planning is required for large projects and application disciplines while revolutionary scientific breakthroughs are almost impossible without taking chances or risks. Before starting the research project on human genome, scientists had already made plans on the content and method of the research. They did not have to take any chances or risks because all they should do have already been carefully planned. There were no technical obstacles that had not been solved. Therefore, they just followed the plan step by step and accomplished the project in the end. As for significant scientific breakthroughs, they are the important discoveries and theories that disaccord, at least to some extent, with established principles or our intuitions, such as the Theory of Relativity and quantum mechanics. One has no choice but to take chances because established theories may not be applicable on the boundary of what is known and what is unknown. Only after being examined through experiments, practices and observations, can they be confirmed or belied. In a word, planning and taking chances or risks are different means for different levels of academic researches.

In the business world, cautious planning contributes to the long-term development of a company and at the same time, risking is imperative for a company to survive, develop and thrive in the highly competitive society. Planning carefully on inquiring market, training stuff and manufacturing products ensure a company's long-term development by keeping its profit increasing or at least not declining. On the other hand, taking risks, such as incorporating with another company, involving in the market fields that have already been occupied by other enterprises or involving in the market fields that are not considered so profitable, is also necessary because these may save the company from the adversity or help to set foot in new businesses. Clearly,in the business field, planning and risking complement each other.

To conclude, success in any realm of life comes equally from taking chances or risks and from careful and cautious planning. In most cases, they complement each other and pave the way towards success.

GRE

篇11：考研英语高分作文盘点

大家都知道考研英语分值最高的部分就是阅读和作文，所以我们应该将把主要精力放在这两个部分上。

今天我们就先来说说关于英语写作我们究竟要怎么进行。

对于作文基础非常差的学生来说，这个阶段的只能是多背范文和模板，而且要背写过，下面为大家准备了几篇模板作文，望对大家有用。

社会热点类模板：

The two pictures illustrate vividly ……. In the left picture ……,while in the right …….

From the two pictures we can sense a crazy tendency of ……. Aside from ……,another telling example is ……,which was so successful in that ……. The pictures also make it obvious that we should …….

Admittedly,it is natural that ……. Nevertheless,it is the responsibility of our government and society to ……. In my opinion,what’s the more important is to ……. In short,…….

家庭关系类模板：

The cartoon reveals a very thought-provoking scene. The artist purposefully exaggerates…… . This picture reveals the in-depth problem of…… .

In fact,…… . There are two reasons for this. The first and perhaps most important is that…… . The other reason is more serious from a practical point of view.…… . It owes to…… .

In my point of view, the trend goes quite against the genuine and original purpose of our…… . What I want to emphasize by the above analysis is that,…… . Therefore,…… I strongly contend that…… .

人生价值类模板：

As the old Chinese saying goes,…… . It echoes with this picture in which…… . The title of the picture further points out that…… .

The picture is meant to…… . As far as I am concerned, I think…… . This universal truth can be particularly proved in the field of…… , where…… .

A brief survey of history about also demonstrates the fundamental importance of…… .…… , for example,…… . The same principle applies to common people as well, and I am sure everybody can benefit from…… .

文化交流类模板：

It is a very eye-catching photo in which…… . What makes this picture extraordinary is ……, which clearly indicates…… .

The sense of that permeates this picture is representative of…… , that is,…… , and therefore，…… . China， in particular，…… . The effect of such communication can be best exemplified by …….

While people belong to nations, cultures know no boundary. ……is not only featured by…… ,but more importantly, by…… . I firmly believe that is contributing, and will contribute more to the world’s peace, development, and prosperity.

教育类模板：

As the title indicates, “…… ”, the set of pictures apparently reminds us that…… . It is discernable that…… .

The drawing virtually reminds its audience a widespread phenomenon existing negatively in the area of basic education in China, that is,…… . That is to say,…… . Such a practice is very harmful in terms of the following aspects.Firstly,…… . Secondly,…… . Last but not the least,…… .

In my point of view,…… , but it is only part of the picture. On the other hand,…… . Therefore, it is an urgent task to…… . As children are the future of our nation, creating a good environment for their upbringing means creating a bright and promising future for our nation.

对比论证类模板：

According to the two pictures presented, it can be observed that. In the left picture,…… . A the same time， as the right one shows. Different people have different views on…… .

Some people support by claiming that…… . In their opinion,…… . In addition,…… . Meanwhile, there are some people, especially young men, who…… . Their reasons are quite different, sometimes for…… , sometimes for…… , sometimes simply for…… .

In my point of view, both sides are partly right. To thoroughly analyze this problem, we should take into consideration of all relevant aspects, so as to make the right decision. Therefore, my conclusion would be that…… .

篇12：考研英语小作文高分

考研英语小作文高分模板，考研英语小作文要求考生根据所给情景写作约100次（标点符号不计算在内）的应用性短文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等。考研教育网认为小作文重点是信函，信函主要有：求职信、投诉信、邀请信、订购信、询问信、感谢信、道歉信、推荐信等八种，而在这八种信函中前五种是重点。

篇13：考研英语高分作文闪光点

2013考研英语高分作文闪光点

2013考研英语高分作文闪光点，作文是考研英语中得分较低的一种题型，究其原因，除了平时缺少练习之外，同学们还缺乏作文抓分技巧。考研教育网建议同学们需要掌握一定的作文模板，除此之外，如果能在作文中设置一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定使你的作文如虎添翼。

高分作文标志：

1、是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样、准确、形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：

1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观地反映事实。句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾的例子：It is ，therefore， high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.

2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作为插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词、助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。举例如下：Other individuals， however， take the attitude that…

3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good， bad ， many， thing， think， people， opinion等等)比如第一条的例子中，applicable替换proper; approaches替换ways; implement替换carry out; sharpen one‘s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。

下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法，精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present， which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ，and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless， feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

exceedingly替换very;(个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩)

thrilling替换exciting;

sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb. be interested in sth;

google替换search;

an army of替换a lot of.

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology， computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them， in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;

Increasing popularity替换more and more popular;

Coincident with…非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With…;

Advancement替换development;

Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换enter into;

Current ( currently )替换now;

Appeal to sb.替换sb. be interested in sth.;

Growing individuals替换more and more people;

It is no exaggeration to say经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的`。(it goes without exaggeration that更好)

For a start， we can， freely， search desired information at any moment . Little by little， our knowledge will be well enriched， and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally， we can get huge recreations online by chatting， playing games， or delivering email.

For a start替换To begin with;

We can， freely， search用了插入语的写作手法;

our knowledge will be well enriched， and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动;

Additionally替换In addition / Besides;

Deliver替换send.

There is no denying that ， however， computers can function in the disservice of human beings， in a way， especially the growing violence ，***， porn pictures， AV-films emerging on the screen ， which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.

There is no denying that ， however， computers can function in the disservice of human beings，这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型;其次however作为插入语;再次，function in the disservice of替换do harm to.

Emerging替换appearing ( fading替换disappearing );

Net citizen网民，属于精彩用词。(直接用netizen更好)

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives， despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ，therefore， take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.

No garden has no weeds替换Every coin has two sides;

Computers do play，使用do表示强调;

Positive替换important / good等;

A slice of替换a part of;

Unfavorable替换bad;

Impacts替换effects / influences;

We should， therefore， take advantage of…使用插入语;

Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替换advantage ( defects替换disadvantage );

Facet替换aspect.

以下是45个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下：

1.individuals，characters， folks替换people ，persons.

2.positive， favorable， rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect， pleasurable ， excellent， outstanding， superior替换good.

3.dreadful， unfavorable， poor， adverse， ill (有害的)替换bad(如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换。)

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games， enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ，as a result， they find their academic records are less impressive.

4.an army of， an ocean of， a sea of， a multitude of ，a host of， many， if not most替换many.

注：用many， if not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词。

Eg. Many individuals， if not most， harbor the idea that…。同理用most， if not all ，替换most.

5.a slice of， quiet a few替换some.

6.harbor the idea that， take the attitude that， hold the view that， it is widely shared that， it is universally acknowledged that替换think (因为是书面语，所以要加that)。

7.affair ，business ，matter替换thing.

8.shared代common .

9.reap huge fruits替换get many benefits.

10.for my part ，from my own perspective替换in my opinion.

11.Increasing(ly)，growing替换more and more(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly

篇14：考研英语高分作文：感谢信

考研英语高分作文：感谢信

【例题】

Directions:

You have just arrived in the city where your are going to spend 3 years for your master’s degree. You have a lot of preparations to do before the new term starts， but you do not know how to go round the city. A friend， Kevin， you have newly acquainted offered you guidance and helped you through difficulties. Write a letter to express your thanks.

Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

【范文】

Dear Kevin，

I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you have offered me during the past weeks. I was a perfect stranger when arriving this city， even not knowing the way to the downtown area. As you know this is the first time for me to come up to this big city.

I bought a guidance book， but there were still difficulties in going around the city. The streets and shops puzzled me so much that I would rather stay indoors. It is your valuable guidance that has enabled me to go about the city without losing myself. I thank you very much for your kind help. Yesterday I went downtown alone to buy some stationery and other stuff.

Lessons will begin in a few days. I will come over to see you some day next week and tell you everything that has happened to me.

Yours sincerely，

Li Ming

【译文】

亲爱的凯文：

很感谢你在过去的几周中给我提供的指导和帮助。在刚来这个城市的时候我完全是一个陌生人。我甚至不知道怎么到市区。你知道的`这是我第一次来这么大的城市。

我买了一本城市指南，但是我依然发现在这个城市中有很多困难。街道和商店都让我很迷惑，于是我就只能待在家里。是你给我的宝贵向导让我能在这个城市中外出不会迷路。很感谢你的帮助。昨天我就独自一人到市中心购买了一些文具和其他用品。

再过几天，我们就要开课了。下周的某个时间我再来看你，告诉你我这里发生的一切。

李明

谨上

扩展阅读

【感谢信开头常用句式和套话】

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for…

Thank you very much for…

I don’t know how to thank you for your kindness to me.

【感谢信结尾常用句式和套话】

My thanks to you for your kindness and assistance when I…and my love for you， always!

I must thank you again for your generous help.

My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.

篇15：考研英语高分作文写作技巧

在考研英语考场上有限的时间里，写出一篇漂漂亮亮、工工整整的考研英语作文是很多考研小伙伴梦寐以求的事。不过，作文共30分，能拿到20+是少数，可见写出高分好作文并不是件容易的事。今天我们从四个判断作文得分的要素出发，来聊一聊一篇高分好的考研英语作文是怎样炼成的。

一、审题准确

这是一个相当重要的得分点，而且是首要前提。如果审题都没有审准确，连出题人的心思都没有猜透，那么文章写得再好，也不可能得高分。是的，考研英语就是这么折磨人，它不会明确告诉你文章的明确主题是什么，而只会通过图片、图表、只言片语暗示你，你须要准确猜出出题人的心思，这是必过的第一关。

二、逻辑清晰

好的文章必须是结构和逻辑清晰的。考研英语作文并不复杂，一般三段就能搞定。第一段描述图片或图表，引出话题，提出论点;第二段展开讨论，或深究原因、或分析现象、或表达各方不同意见;第三段总结结尾，或把结论上升到一个高度，提出解决办法、发出呼吁。每段开头最好有标志性语言，罗列观点时，最好使用清晰有逻辑的连接词。

三、表达流畅

如果是结构是骨骼，那么正文就是血肉，一篇有血有肉的文章才算好文章。考研英语注重对长难句的考查，不仅要在阅读中读懂，最好还能在作文中写出来一两句。有目的地使用一些从句、复合句、强调句、倒装句，会让文章特别出彩。但也要注意长短句结合，如果通篇都是复杂的长句，读起来会很累，而且也有过分卖弄的嫌疑，并不是好事。

四、卷面整洁

这点是最基本的，但却同样重要。考研英语在考场上的时间，相对于四六级来说要充裕一些，建议小伙伴们最好先打一遍草稿。这个草稿可以不必打得太细，只需明确结构即可，一些句子也可以几个词带过，为的是节省时间。但总是要心里有数之后再在正式的答题区域落笔，避免多次涂改，造成卷面邋遢。

我们说考研英语作文也有是“踩点给分”原则的，以上四个要素，往往就是阅卷老师判断一篇作文高分与否的关键考察点。建议大家在平时的写作练习中，就按照考场上的标准严格要求自己，久而久之，写出一篇高分作文将不再是梦!

篇16：考研英语作文高分心得

考研英语作文高分心得

考研英语作文写作部分分两类：大作文、小作文。小作文一般给出作文内容要点，以求职信，辞职信，道歉信和感谢信等为命题体裁，要求考生按照提示写清楚要表达的要点。专家建议考生在写小作文时，只要表意明确就可以了，不需要复杂华丽的文采修饰。大作文类型，从文体上看，可以划分为说明文和议论文，因为考这类体裁的写作比较符合形势发展的实际需要，在学习、工作和生活中，人们所书写的材料大多也是说明文或议论文；从选题范围上看，大都是目前人们最为关注的问题，反映了当前社会的热门话题或可以用热门话题来透视的哲理性问题。专家通过对近些年的真题分析；从出题形式上看，在平稳中逐渐趋于多样化，写作题目易于理解，无论以文字的形式还是以图表、图画的形式出现都浅显易懂。（来源：考研教育网）

小作文的备考技巧

应用文写作要求考生在三个方面完成要求：一要注意把握信息点；第二是把握语言点，内容要十分明确，不要出现过多的错误；第三是要注意格式和语言。应用文的字数要求是100个字，大概8句话，8句话怎么分配呢？第一段就写一句话，第一句话表明你写信的基本内容：如果是询问信息的话，就说你写这封信要询问以下几个问题；如果是投诉，就说写这封信是要表达对什么东西的不满；如果是请求信，就说写这封信想要请求什么东西就可以了。总之，就一句话，简明扼要。然后，用简练的语言表达清楚题目要求表达的内容和信息。最后一句话，就是一个礼貌的结尾。

大作文的备考技巧

大作文的写作一般会给考生写作提纲，或图表、图画，或图文并茂。命题方式虽然多样，但题目涉及面往往是考生比较熟悉的内容，目的是测定考生语言的实际应用能力。要求表达清楚，文字连贯，中心突出，内容丰富，句式多变，句子结构和用词正确。（来源：考研教育网）

语言的应用能力不可能一蹴而就，必须厚积薄发，必须经过长期的实践锻炼。如何提高英语写作能力呢？一是要背大量的优秀范文，整段整篇地背，并转换为自己的语言，写作时才能随心所欲地支配。考试时避免套用以前死记硬背的几个范文，把一些不达意的词堆积在一起，没有统一性，无法很好地表现主题。另外，多动手才能提高笔下功夫，才能保证在考场上顺利写作。

适当加强阅读量

很多考生无法清晰完整的用英语来表达自己的意思。专家认为之所以出现这样的'情况原因在于平时阅读量小。考生多读多看，表达才能游刃有余。历年的写作考题的内容和主题基本都与当年的热点话题有一定的关系，因此，考研在即，考生要对社会热点问题、国际国家大事有所知晓，对于比较热点、比较重要的主题，可以有目的地进行搜集整理。另读得越多，在潜移默化中，提高英语写作能力的速度也就越快。

背诵经典文段

篇17：考研英语如何写出高分作文

一、了解意图，抓住精髓

近年来的大作文非常玄妙，值得细品。首先，很可能大作文正在经历由时事向哲理过渡的重大变革，这在、、、、和真题上表现得最为明显。其次，出题人将尽量用图画来表达意图，而不借助或少借助图中或图旁的文字，这样意义表达的会更深刻，对考生的思考力和判断力的要求也就更高。第三，图画的含义深刻，可以接受的解释也较多，但要想取得高分，必须紧扣图画，把握住其中的精髓，最深刻地表达其核心的意义。

二、扣紧主题

写大作文时切记要扣紧主题，切不可离题太远，导致最后回不来或时间不够写不完。另外，各部分之间的比例应适当，第一段不要太长。与主题相关的关键词语一定要用对，否则会影响分数。

三、看清要求

有的同学一看到写“网络”，就立即联想到这方面最火爆的话题“网络成瘾”，将主题确定为此。有的同学干脆将之转变为自己看到过的文章――“网络的利与弊”。这些都是不正确的做法。写大作文时，首先要减少语言的错误，提高语言的准确性。语言错误有许多种，有的是小错误，甚至可以忽略不计，而有些是大错误，是让老师看到后不得不扣分的错误。另一方面就是增加闪光点，除了结构清晰外，闪光点主要指好的词、词组或句型，一是使用恰当，二是要有变换。上述这两点都不容易，而结合起来就更难了。如果文章分为三段，那么起始段、结尾段和中间段落的开始部分是非常关键的。对于背诵的好词、词组和句型，一定要和具体的行文联系起来，融入到文章中去，不仅要用对，还要用好，避免给人突兀的感觉。

四、避免投机取巧

近年来，有些考生有投机的心理，结果却很惨烈。有的考生准备了万能模板，直接往上套，这样的效果并不好。正如有的较为激进的阅卷老师所说，这些考生是想通过不诚实的手段得到不属于他的东西，这样的人应该得到惩罚。实际上这些考生中有的水平还不错，如果坚持依靠自己，咬紧牙关奋力拼搏的话，结果会是不错的。

综上所述，对于作文这一部分来说，大家应该首先了解不同文章的特点和规律，而后用心地学习范文并进行模仿，然后练习全文写作并请老师批改再细细揣摩。相信通过这样的过程，大家的写作一定会有长足的进步。

拓展阅读：

教育类作文模板

教育类模板一：

The picture shows…… . symbolizes…… . As is quoted in the picture,…… .

It apparently mirrors an increasingly common social phenomenon in China― in contrast with…… . One the one hand， the problem partially attributes to…… . Sometimes…… . On the other hand,…… . For example,…… ,while…… .

In my opinion, the government needs to launch a reform in the education system with measures that can show immediate effect. proves to be most beneficial to students. Further, a large-scale reform in the macroeconomic level to is the basic solution of this issue.

教育类模板二：

As the title indicates, “…… ”, the set of pictures apparently reminds us that…… . It is discernable that…… .

篇18：考研英语作文高分套路

一、图画描述段

As is vividly shown in the picture, …

It is clearly depicted in the picture that…

This picture depicts a thought-provoking scene of…

According to the figures given in the chart, …

The chart above provides a series of essential figures, illustrating the changes taking place in a time span of… years.

The graph demonstrates that the number of... is growing/declining rapidly in...

二、话题引出段

Nowadays, there is a growing concern over the issue of…

People in growing numbers are directing their attention to…

When it comes to…, people’s notions may vary from one to another.

Traditional virtue/value has it that…, yet people are… currently.

三、观点对比段

Opposite voices are now rising in the debate. Some people firmly believe that…. On the contrary, quite a few people argue that…

The controversial issue has aroused opposite opinions. One focuses on…; the other opinion revolves around…

四、利弊列举段

Every coin has two sides, and this issue is no exception. Above all, … In addition… More importantly… However, the negative influence it renders should not be neglected.… not only… but also...

Is this phenomenon a blessing or a curse? The following list of advantages and disadvantages can explain everything.

五、举例论证段

For instance, ...

Take… for an example

A case in point is…

The following illustrations can serve as strong evidence of the phenomenon.

六、原因列举段

Why should this phenomenon take place? There are generally three factors accounting for it.

Having taken everything into consideration, we may attribute the sharp change to three aspects.

七、意义阐释段

The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to…

The fact/phenomenon that… indicates that…

Having scrutinized the details of the picture, we can discuss the implications subtly conveyed from it.

八、归纳结论段

In conclusion, ...

In my opinion, ...

As far as I am concerned, ...

Taking into account all the analyses above, we may confidently come to the conclusion that…

九、预测趋势段

There is no denying that… will continue increasing/decreasing in the better/worse direction.

Undoubtedly, the tendency reflected from the chart will undergo a continuous increase/decrease in the near future.

十、建议措施段

Therefore, it is imperative that we should take some drastic measures.

As far as I am concerned, two effective measures must be immediately taken to pull through the crisis.

As a result, it is advisable to settle the problem by two means.

小作文万能模板

考研英语小作文占10分，要求考生根据所给情景写出约100词(标点符号不计算在内)的应用文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等。

小作文的评分重点在于信息表达的全面、准确、适当。主要包括信息点的覆盖是否全面，语篇结构和格式是否正确，语言表达是否准确，语气是否恰当等方面。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据试题的具体情况做出相应规定。

一、一般开头句型

I’m writing to… 开门见山的开头模式

I’m writing to inform you that… (通知类型)

I’m writing to seek your assistance in… (请求类型)

I’m writing in response to your advertisement in… (回应类型)

I’m writing to express my views on… (建议类型)

I’m writing to apply for the scholarship that your department offers to students from other countries. (申请类型)

I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding… (咨询类型)

I’m writing to express my disappointment/dissatisfaction about… (投诉类型)

二、感谢类句型

I’m most grateful to you for your…

I’m writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude for…

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks for…

I feel greatly indebted to you for…

I’m writing to tell you how greatly I appreciate all you have done for me…

But for your kind assistance, I would have…

I must thank you again for your generous help.

Please accept my deepest gratitude.

三、道歉类句型

I feel really sorry to you for…

I must apologize to you for…

I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able to…

Please accept my sincere apology for…

I want you to know how badly I feel about…

四、一般结尾句型

Any favorable consideration of my application will be highly appreciated. (申请/求职)

We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your presence. (邀请函)

Best wishes for your greater success in your career. (祝愿)

Thank you for your patience and concern in reading this letter. I hope this does not cause you too much inconvenience. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. (套话组合)

篇19：考研英语作文高分短语

考研英语作文高分短语

考研英语作文高分要打好基础，深度广度拓展词汇、短语和表达。下面总结了九大类写作高分必备短语，希望考生能够在复习中贯彻应用。

1、文章及段落起始常用的过渡词语

to begin with【例】To begin with, smoking should be banned in public areas.generally speaking.

2、文章及段落结尾常用的过渡词语

therefore, thus【例】Thus, taking morning exercises regularly may reduce the chances of getting sick.in conclusion.

3、常用表示先后次序的.过渡词语

first第一， second第二，next其次，然后 eventually，最后，最终 since then，自此以后 afterward，以后，随后 meanwhile，同时 therefore，因而 immediately，立刻 finally，最后，最终【例】Finally

4、常用表示因果关系的过渡词语

accordingly于是，for this reason由于这个原因， as a result of由结果， in this way这样，consequently结果，因此 due to，由于 therefore，因而 because of，因为 thus

5、常用表示比较和对比的过渡词语

in contrast with和成对照 similarly同样， whereas然而 on the contrary相反， different from与不同 likewise同样， equally important同样重要，on the other hand另一方面，

6、常用表示举例的过渡词语

a case in point恰当的例子，for example举例， namely( that is )即，这就是说， for instance举例，【例】A case in point is the water control project along the Yangtze River.

7、有关描写图表的过渡词语

during this time在此期间，【例】During this time, more women took various jobs.

apart from除了之外,【例】Apart from the figures, the information below the table also suggests the growth of production.compared with与相比较,【例】Compared with the percentage of the base year, it jumped by 15 percent.from the above table/ chart/ graph根据上图（表）所示,【例】From the above chart, it can be seen that changes do occur in the society.常

8、用表示强调的过渡词语

furthermore此外，moreover而且， besides此外， in fact实际上， also而且，也 indeed的确， again另外还， in particular尤其，特别，naturally当然，自然，必然，【例】Naturally, he denied that he had committed the crime.

9、逻辑连接词语

second, last but not the least, seeing先后次序关系，so, as a result of this, consequently, in consequence原因、结果关系，even though, though, regardless of转折关系，also, as well as, eitheror并列关系，not onlybut also, in order to do it, accordingly递进关系，when in fact, similarly, compared with比较关系，on the contrary, contrary to, conversely对比关系，as he explains, like, put it simply, for one thingfor another举例关系，particularly, to be true, other things being equal强调关系，if so, if possible, provide that条件关系，in brief, in short, the conclusion can be drawn that归纳总结关系。

篇20：考研英语作文高分技巧

一、善用亮点词

考研写作的词汇不能太简单，需要体现出你的词汇的丰富程度，当然这是可以准备，我们可以有意识的将常用词汇替换成亮点词汇，比如remember替换成bear in mind;important替换成crucial或者significant;about替换成regarding, concerning;should替换成be suppose to或者ought to。

二、善用插入语

插入语的使用会让你的句子看起来结构更加丰富多变，同时也符合英语的习惯表述，例如：可以把副词和连接词放在句子中间(一般放在主谓之间，两边分别加上逗号)，例如：however、therefore、for example、I believe。举例：Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ...这样表述，不仅使句意前后连贯，还可使文章简介明了。

三、结合主题

考生在后期会背诵大量的模板句，但是一定要注意模板与主题的结合。作文意要切合题目要求，内容要符合主旨，这其实是一个最基本的要求。It is essential for us to highlight the significance of_________and cultivate the awareness of_______. In conclusion, it is obvious that ________ is of great significance in our daily lives. 中间需要填充相关主题词，考生只要注意分析题目要求，注意主题词的使用，搭配合适的句型，便可一举取胜。

四、长短句交叉使用

还需要注意的是，大作文不一定每一句都写成长难句，那样会让人看着很累。文章中是否有长短句交叉，用词是否多样、准确、形象，是否有能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词，等等，也会使文章加分。

篇21：考研英语高分小作文

考研英语高分小作文

Section III Writing

Part A

51.Directions:

Some international students are coming to your university. Write then an email in the name of the Students' Union to

1) extend your welcome and

2) Provide some suggestions for their campus life here.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET2.

Don not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming”instead.

Do not write the address.(10 Points)

Dear friends：

I am very glad to hear that you would come to our school. Firstly I will extend to you our warmest welcome, and we are looking forward to the common learning.

Before you come here, I will try to make some useful suggestions for you. First of all, it is better to learn Chinese well as soon as possible. Perhaps it’s not easy to master a language in a short time, but it is very important in your daily life. Secondly, it is necessary to know some cultural differences between two countries. Otherwise, you will meet some unnecessary troubles.

At last, you should get to know the weather and prepare for the cloths in each season.

We are looking forward to seeing you soon and wish everything goes well.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

大学网考研频道。

篇22：考研英语作文高分技巧

一、认真审题

审好题是写出优秀作文的第一步，下笔之前考生要仔细阅读试题的相关要求及信息，如图画、图表、数字等，准确把握命题老师的出题意图。作文最忌讳上来就写，想到哪里写到哪里，不明确考点，凭自己的主观臆断来编故事。以考研英语一大作文为例，漫画部分显示，有两个游客坐在一只小船上，边游览边往河里扔垃圾，附近河面上漂浮着大量的垃圾，漫画下面有四个字：旅程之“余”。很明显，漫画立意在发展的同时要保护好自然环境。有的同学如果草草审题，盲目下笔，一旦出现文不对题，后果不堪设想。

二、列出提纲

考研英语的答题时间是很紧张的，因此要尽量压缩答题时间，考生们在平日的备考中也十分注重速度的练习。在作文的写作中，从构思到成稿时间有限，无法将大量时间放到列出详细提纲上，但是在最短时间内列一个粗略的关键词提纲还是相当有必要的。对原始材料分析归纳后形成一个基本的结构框架：如漫画所要表达的主题是什么，directions中的要求包含了哪些内容，文章段落应该如何组织，这些都要心中有数。只有在基本框架确定了的基础上，考生将具体内容填充完整时，才能思路清晰、行文流畅。可以说，列出提纲对考研英语作文写作起着事半功倍的效果。

三、开始写作

开始写作时一定要注意以下几点：

(1)语言的连贯统一

要选择那些最能体现中心思想，最具代表性的材料，而且这些材料要表达一致的意思，切忌堆砌词汇，注意语言前后的逻辑关系，关联词要使用到位。

(2)词汇、语法的正确

成文中要特别注意语法、词汇以及标点的运用，不要一味追求华丽的词汇而写自己没有把握的单词和连自己都不知道对错的长难句，造成不必要的失分现象。考试时要选择自己最有把握的词汇、句式，冲刺时多背诵闪光句型、词汇。

(3)卷面整洁

有了前几步的答题，考生到这里还需要注意保持卷面的整洁，有些考生没有在动笔前观察答题卡答题空间的大小，造成小作文答题空间不够，内容写不完而导致失分的情况。所以各位考生一定要根据答题空间及时调整自己的字体大以及内容长短。卷面书写工整，让阅卷老师读起来“赏心悦目”。

篇23：考研英语作文高分秘诀

很多考研考生提到考研英语作文痛苦不已，究竟怎样在考研英语作文中取得高分，让自己少走弯路?老师提出英语作文高分秘诀，唯“积累”二字。

考研英语语法的积累

英语写作中，语句对错的唯一检查标准便是语法是否正确。同学们在复习过程中，除了记住辅导班老师上课讲的语法知识外，还应该准备一本专门讲语法的书，仔细推敲里面的语法知识，要能够在脑袋里面形成一个清晰的语法结构图。考研英语写作中，如果能够出现非谓语动词、从句以及一些插入语，会为文章增色不少。

考研英语词汇的积累

考研要求同学们掌握大纲上5500词汇，尽管不能一一掌握，但也要掌握常用词汇。大家不妨从考研历年真题入手，将真题中的考研词汇全部“消灭掉”。每碰到一个拿不准的单词，就记到本子上，查出在文章中的具体意思以及其他比较常用的释义，然后在空闲的时间，经常翻阅。

篇24：考研英语作文高分秘诀

同学们平时应该大量阅读英语美文，可以订阅一些英语报刊，摘抄美文进行背诵。注意总结一些高难句模板，在写作中时自然而然地运用几句也可以为作文加分不少。

考研英语作文练笔的`积累

有些同学平时从来很少写作文，认为多记一些模板就可以了。其实，大家平时应该多练练笔，可以用英语写一些日记，一个星期至少写1到2篇的英语作文，并且经常找老师修改，纠正自己的语法错误，只有这样才能够逐渐让英语写作能力得到提高。

篇25：考研英语作文常用高分句型

考研英语作文常用高分句型

短文高分句型

1、常见起始句型

英文文章的开头有很多方法，下面列出了一些常见的.文章开头方法以及相应的句型，以供大家参考。尽管现在的考研作文大部分是图画作文，要求考生在起始段中描述图画内容，但是考生仍然可以在起始段中灵活运用以下方法。

定义法：

Generation gap refers to the lack of understanding between generations caused by their different attitudes and experiences. It is a common phenomenon that exists everywhere and has a great influence on the relationship between generations.

Competition, as a great force to call on people to develop constantly, has already been critical in the modern society.

Honesty refers to the quality of a person who tells the truth and works without cheating. Honesty is regarded as the most important virtue admired everywhere.

Blog is a new fashion among citizens. It sprung up when more and more people are possessing personal computers. It is a new kind of life style, learning style and work style.

问题法：

Do you believe that everyone is born to a certain fate that he cannot change? Or do you think, as I do, that each person makes his own fate?

With the development of China’s opening-up and reform, many parents intend to have their children get a foreign education. What do you think of sending teenagers to study abroad?

With the advance and development of the society, the requirement on individuals becomes more and more demanding. Then how to get well-prepared for challenges in this competitive world becomes a hot issue for many people.

Nowadays tuition and fees for college are much higher than ever before. How to finance one’s college education has become a matter of great concern for many people, particularly the young students and their family.

对比法：

As regards the farmer migration into the cities, there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. The majority of people argue that this mass migration is beneficial to the development of both the countryside and the cities. Other people, however, hold that there are more disadvantages arising from this migration movement.

When it comes to the issue of whether college students should set up their company, some people think that it is a good way to apply the book knowledge to the practice. Others argue that students, whose main task is to study, should not ruin their time and energy like that, thus should be prohibited.

There is a heated discussion today about whether the parents should send their children studying abroad. Those who oppose this phenomenon argue that it brings a great burden and pressure to the family, and for students they cannot adapt to the new culture very quickly. But people who are in favor of such behavior maintain that children will be more competitive and well repaid in the future life.

引用法：

A popular saying goes like this, “everything has two sides”. It is the same with the private cars. The advantages of owning a private car go along with its disadvantages.

A proverb says, “Time is money”, but I think time is more precious than money, for we can earn more money when we’ve spent some, but lost time can never be found again.

The elders always remind us that slow and careful work yields perfect results.

As the old Chinese saying goes, only through reading thousands of books can one write fluently.

事实陈述法：

The earth is now burdened with overcrowded population while much of its natural resources are exhausted aimlessly.

With the rapid development of industry, the environment is being destroyed without any mercy from man. Trees are cut down, rare animals get killed, rivers drain dry, and mountains become bare. With the damage comes the punishment of the nature, such as flood, sandstorm, drought, plague, unknown virus, etc.

The past few years have witnessed a frantically increasing interest in buying lottery tickets, especially for the young people. Some people even go so far to quit their work and make it their career, which means great risks.

With the economic development of our country, more and more university students are engaged in the activities of doing part-time jobs. As a college student, I always wonder whether it is good or bad for us to do so.

观点阐述法：

It is generally believed that the heavy summer flooding resulted from the extensive deforestation. Experts argue that China must introduce a massive planting program to cope with this disaster. But I doubt whether this program alone will solve the problem.

It is widely acknowledged that too much indulgence is prone to spoil the child and brings them no good.

Currently/Recently/Nowadays/At the present/At the present stage/ there is a widespread/widely-held concern/opinion/ belief/ view that …

Now people in growing number are coming to realize that…

Recently the issue of … has been brought to public attention.

One great man once mentioned that … Now more and more people share the belief.

There is no denying / doubt that …

Recently attention/stress has been placed/ laid upon …

When asked about the question/matter/problem of… some/many/few/most people …

Now it is generally/commonly / widely held / thought that…, but I wonder / doubt that…

There is a heated discussion / debate/ controversy now about the issue of …

The topic / issue / attitude of … is quite popular among …

图画描述法：

As is shown/described in the pictures above, we can see clearly that a flower, with the protection from the heavy rain, grows very well in a green house. But once removed the protection and exposed to the bitter weather, it withers and fades.

In the picture, we can see clearly that all of the men are working together to build a house. Without their combined effort, the house would be unlikely to be completed. This is a kind of teamwork spirit that is highly valued in today’s society.

The primary purpose of this picture lies in the criticism of the moral degradation.

It goes without saying that the drawings aim at revealing a common and serious problem in China: how to educate and cultivate the young.

The cartoon features a man who looks fat, wealthy and edacious.

What the drawing is trying to express is very conspicuous.

A first glance at this cartoon tells us that a matchmaker is attempting to create a sense of crush between a man and a woman.

The picture describes an increasingly common scenario in today’s world.

Almost everybody who lives in the urban areas of China is familiar with the phenomenon shown in this picture.

This is a very thought-provoking picture. / The cartoon reveals a very thought-provoking scene. / This is quite an extraordinary and meaningful picture.

It is a very alarming cartoon, in which hundreds of new-born babies are crying for food but there are only two bowls of porridge available.

The title of the picture further points out that to read books means to enlighten and development our thoughts with the help of other’s thinking.

This picture describes the scene of…

The cartoon reveals an astonishing scenario that…

The cartoon features the sharp contrast between…

The picture presents an interesting scenario occurring in…

It goes without saying that this picture aims at revealing a current problem:

It is a very eye-catching

篇26：如何练就考研英语高分作文

如何练就考研英语高分作文

对于考研英语，大家经常强调阅读理解的重要性。其实，写作部分也不容忽视，作文能否拿到高分完全可以决定到全局!对于想要冲刺名校，取得高分的同学们，一定要抓住作文。但是，大部考生对于作文的复习缺乏一个完整的系统的思路，不知该从何下手，教育英语教研室的张老师建议大家可以从以下几个方面着手英语作文复习。

一、多读

常言道“熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟”，作文亦是如此。要想能够写出漂亮的英语文章，最基本的就是有足够的语言输入量。因此，考生一定要养成阅读英文文章的习惯。阅读分为精读和泛读，而对于写作能力提高的最好办法就是精读。拿到一篇文章，你要能够简单分析其段落结构及主旨思想、并且要整理出其中的好词、好句，留待每日的温习。虽然泛读主要是提高阅读能力，但是对于培养英语的思维习惯也是很有帮助的，因此要是能够保证每天泛读1-2则英文新闻等，一会大有裨益的。经过了一段时间的阅读，在语感以及语言素材上，就会提升一个档次。

二、多背

背诵是快速提高写作成绩的一条捷径，考生可以选择历年真题的范文和一些与真题作文相近的文章进行背诵，要在理解文章内容的基础上有重点、有目的地进行背诵。把结构合理、适用于多种语言环境的句子背下来不但有助于你理解文章，更是能够在无形中增强你的表达能力。同学们也可以拿一些英语原著名篇来读、背，这样可以加强自己的语感，使自己的表达更加地道。

但是，不少考生只是依赖于背诵一些经典的范文或模板，然后想着考试的时候直接默写背诵的`好句子，其实到了考场上才发现一个句子也写不出来。我们只有在日常练习中把先前背诵的经典文章和句子灵活运用到我们的写作练习中，并适当的加工改写成我们自己的句子，这样才能达到较好的学习效果，一味的“拿来主义”并不能从根本上提高我们的写作水平。

三、多写

读、背到一定程度后，就开始练习写作了，如果想要写出好文章，不仅要练，而且要多练。前期练习的时候，考生可以随意写，想到什么写什么，也无需考虑什么结构或者字数，只是随意的表达，让自己对写作不恐惧，拿起笔能够写出东西来。慢慢地，考生要针对考研选择一定的话题、按照一定的格式要求写作，考生最好能找有范文的题目进行练习，以便写完后能与范文进行对比。我们练习的重点是要检查文章是否切题，行文是否流畅，有无严重的语法错误等，同时通过与范文的比较可以及时发现自己的短处在哪。考生还应该注意，一定把每次练习都当作模拟演练，将时间控制在考试规定时间内。考生可以每周写一篇质量比较高的作文并且力争写好，不要在一个水平上反复重复，这样写几篇后就会有收获。

只有真正的动笔“写”才能体现出一个人的写作能力是否得到了提高，所以加强实际写作练习有着至关重要的作用。

作文考察的是英语的综合运用能力，一是要看平常的词汇和语法积累，二是要跳出固定思维，多做有创造性的尝试。不少考生或许会认为“读”、“背”、“写”这三招是老生常谈，但是倘若真的将这些落实，你的英语写作水平会突飞猛进的。最后，祝您早日收到理想院校的通知书!

篇27：高分考研英语作文素材

添加修饰成分

英语中最常见的修饰成分是定语，用于说明名词的品质与特征。而可以作定语的成分包括形容词、名词、代词、数词、不定式、动名词、分词、介词短语、从句等。

比如：

原：Young people should be condemned.

改：Young people giving up supporting their parents should be condemned.

(注：分词短语giving up supporting their parents作后置定语，修饰前面的young people。此外，可以将其变为定语从句who give up supporting their parents进行替换。)

句首添加状语

英语中的多数副词一般是放在动词后面，或者放在be动词、助动词或情态动词之后且实义动词之前(若实义动词后有宾语，则放于宾语之后)。

而在写作中将其置前，可以起突出和强调的作用。

比如：

Obviously/Interestingly/Ironically，what the picture conveyed should be given further analysis.

多用复合句

复合句类型比较多，但是在考研中一个主句加一个从句基本上是标配。

但是要把复合句写好的话，一方面可以使用词汇替换的技巧，另外一方面还需要用不同的句型。

(1) 用it作形式主语：

结构：It be+adj./done/n.+that.../to do sth.

例：It is obvious that protecting environment is our compulsory duty and also a legal behavior.

(2) 使用定语从句(这个是英语写作中需要重点掌握的句式)

It goes without saying that the cartoon depicts four persons are competitively playing a football game, which captures our eyes successfully.

(3)使用双重否定：

比如：可以用no/not+表否定意义的形容词，如It is not impossible (for sb.) to do sth. 也可以用no/not/never+without，如sb. cannot do sth. without n./doing sth.此外，还可以用no/not/never/nobody/few+具有否定意义的动词或短语，如sb. never fail to do sth.

(4) 使用倒装结构：

一种情况是使用“Only+状语”置于句首，如：Only in this way can we resolve the problem. 另一种情况是将否定词置于句首，如：By no means should weturn a blind eye to such things of spoiling children.

(5)使用强调句：

可强调动词：I do expect that the issue of environment pollution can be settled as soon as possible.

也可强调句子某个成分：It was persistence and optimism that made Thomas Edison bravely confront a variety of obstacles and other failures and then finally invent the electrical lamp.

篇28：高考作文10种高分作文开头写法

10种高分作文开头写法

1题记式开头

在开头部分先写一小段文字作为题记。这些文字可以是对文章的总结，可以是引子，可以是感触等形式。这样能增强文章的色彩，起到开头点题，吸引读者的作用。

如《语文从我身边轻轻走过》的开头：“轻轻地，你——语文，从我身边走过，留下一串串美妙的音符，时常绕在我身边，鼓励我，激励我，陶冶我。——题记

再如《非同寻常--我是一道风景》的开头：“我不愿生活得像个问号，东张西望找不到自己的跑道，现在我正为梦想起速奔跑——总感觉，我非同寻常。——题记

这两篇文章的开头都是用带有统领全文的题记作为开头，上来就把读者引入自己所创设的感情基调之中，起到先声夺人的效用。

2引用式开头

引用古今中外的诗歌、名人名言、俗语谚语、名言警句等作为文章的开头。这样可以增加文章的权威性、知识性、文采性、深刻性，同时起到一种装点纹饰的作用。这种引用有直接引用和间接引用二种形式。

如《江南的味道》的开头：“多情的江南，让多少文人墨客梦魂萦绕。难怪郑愁予会说：‘我打江南走过，江南走过，那等在季节的容颜，如莲花的开落。’满腔的爱恋竟赋予那出水芙蓉。”这是引用名家的散文作为开头，起到很好的作用。

再如《我们就是希望》的开头：“我试着耀眼的瞬间/是划过天边的刹那火焰/我为你来看我不顾一切/我在这里啊/就是这里啊/惊鸿一般短暂/像夏花一样绚烂”这是引用新诗作为文章的开头。

还有引用歌词作为开头的，如《心灵的回声》：“走四方，路迢迢，水长长，迷迷茫茫，一村又一庄……”这种开头可以随着时代的不同而千变万化，要根据内容的需要，根据中心的需要，合理引用当下最耳熟能详的歌词，这不失是一种明智的选择。

3环境描写式开头

包括自然环境和社会环境的描写，这些描写都有特定的作用，或衬托人物的心情，或交待故事的背景，或渲染某种气氛等。总之，都是为突出主旨而服务的。

如《想起了父亲苍白的脸》的开头：“夜，好静谧，柔和的月光散了一地银白;夜，好深沉，父亲那时起时落的鼾声犹如一首动人的月光曲，回荡在夜色上空。望着熟睡的父亲的脸，我的思绪也飘向那圣洁的夜空------”这种对夜的描写隐含着作者深深的对父亲的感激之情，所以这段环境描写放在开头十分成功，把我们带入了夜的沉静之中，让我们和作者一起回忆。

再如《今天，我真快乐》：“夜幕早已降临，深蓝色的天空中挂着一轮金黄色的圆月，月儿旁边是许多眨巴眼睛的星星。街上的人儿三三两两地走着，不时爆发出一阵开心的笑声。”

这种环境描写把自然和人的活动结合起来，给我们一种夜的幽静，人的和谐、快乐、幸福的感受。

4排比句式开头

用一组能突出中心、句式整齐、气势恢宏、寓意深刻的排比句开头。这能给读者一气呵成之感，有利于突出那种强烈的具有爆发性的情感，起到震撼效果。

如《发现，生命的图腾》的开头：

“总有这样一种图腾，盛满生活的闪光之处;

总有这样一种人群，走出独步千秋的汗青文化;

总有这样一种发现，雕镂人心，永不锈鉵。”

再如《语文，我的挚友》的开头：

语文，就像清凉甘甜的泉水，畅饮泉水会让我的心变得玲珑剔透。

语文，就像浩瀚无边的大海，倾听大海，会让我的心变得宽阔博大。

语文，就像纯洁无瑕的白雪，欣赏白雪，会让我的心变得高尚纯洁。

以上文章的开头显得句式整齐，结构严谨，气势凌人，给人一种美感的享受。

5抒情语言式开头

这种形式就是在开头部分就抒发强烈的情感，先把读者的感情因素调动起来。这样可以抓住读者的心，提高读者的阅读兴趣，为文章打下一个坚实的感情基调，达到以情动人的效果。

如《我要说声“谢谢你”》的开头：

“当我看到这个作文题目时，我热血澎湃，激动得不能自已，我要感谢我的母亲，感谢她对我的养育之恩。”

文章开头就抒发对母亲的恩情，切题直接，而且感情真挚。

再如《黑眼睛，黑头发》的开头：

“想来惭愧，对于一个在我生活里出现频率最高、最熟悉的人，我却没有一个清晰的轮廓。记忆中，她就像一块岩石，能吃苦耐劳，有过剩的体力。因此，对于她为我所做的一切，自然看作理所应当，只因她是我的母亲，有着对我的责任。”

文章开头就说自己“惭愧”，那么到底是为什么呢?然后就用抒情性的语言表达自己对母亲的愧疚的情感。

可以看出，这种开头很容易和读者产生感情上的共鸣，勾起读者心中隐埋的某种和文章形似的情感，达到以情动人的目的。

6设置悬念式开头

这种开头故意设置谜团，而又故意不予理会，或做出某种猜想，以引起读者的好奇心，让读者继续关注事件的发展。这种写法能把读者带入特定的情景之中，与作者同喜同乐同悲。

如《问题是否越多越好?》的开头：班里有不少“好问”的同学，有着问不完的问题。下课、午自习，甚至放学后，总能看见他们的身影忙碌地出入老师的办公室，大至一整道题，小至一个标点，事无巨细，一概相问。同学不解，问之，则答曰：君子之学必好问。君子之学必好问，这原本不错，学习怎能无问?可我又不禁质疑：问，真的越多越好吗?

文章在开头就提出“问题越多越好吗?”的问题，当然我们每个人都有自己的看法，想知道答案和自己的是否一样，可是作者就是不说，以引起读者的好奇心。

再如《活力四射的初三岁月》：白驹过隙的一瞬，我抬起头，感觉到岁月正随风吹散，不仅颜面叹息，内心漾起的是一丝欣喜和怀恋。活力四射的初三岁月，青春律动的我们挥汗如雨，只为灿烂在六月。那段岁月是美妙的……

文章表达出对初三生活的怀念，说它是“活力四射”，可是到底是什么样的呢?这就设置了一个悬念让读者继续跟着作者的思路看下去。

7特写镜头式开头

这种开头用一个特写的镜头放在文章开头，把事情或者感情特写化，让读者通过这个特写进入文章的正文。

如《一次难忘的实践》的开头：酒红色的幕布拉开了，色彩缤纷的旋转舞台上，灯光闪耀。在窗外迷人的月光和闪闪星星影射下，音乐会终于开始了。本文开始就把镜头对准绚丽的舞台和迷人的月光，用以渲染一种焦急的气氛。

又如《我的爷爷》的开头：一双没有光彩的眼睛深陷在如枯井一样的骨框里，眼珠有气无力的盯着我，泪水将流未流，泪珠想滴未滴，就是爷爷这双眼睛看着我长大……本文的开头把视线全都集中到爷爷的眼睛上，通过眼睛的描写来表达我对爷爷深沉的爱。

这种形式和以描写开头有相似之处，有时候可以二者结合起来用，这样能收到更好的表达效果。

8比喻语句开头

开头使用比喻，可以使文章生动活泼、简洁明快，把抽象的问题具体化，把深奥的道理浅显化。这样既可以增强文采，又能说明道理，容易使读者接受。

如《学习贵在创新》的开头：“创新，是学习的生命力。它就像一盏明灯在黑暗中放射出万丈光芒，引导人们不断前行，并且走向成功。”

再如《读父亲》的开头：“父亲是一本饱含哲理的书，在书页间流露着伟岸、正直，每一字每一句都教给我做人的道理。很小的时候我就在读他。虽然我谈到的只是很肤浅的一小部分而已。但我就是这样在读他的过程里成长，在成长的过程中体验、理解。”